What do you think of this story idea?

Hmmm, I think the cover is a little strange, too gothic, but the story sounds like a fantastic idea. On the cover though, I liked the old picture on the top left and the way you have the title written. As for the end of the story, maybe Scarlet could find a note that would explain everything. Or possibly, the note could explain some secret that would lead Scarlet to repeat what Alice did. I don't know, just a suggestion. Good luck!